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[Christmas in Compton Ina]

RAMONES For Christmas!!!!

I loved the placement of the Ramones.

[The Bitter Unloved Teaser]

Decent trailer.

You seemed to have executed your idea pretty well even though I had a difficult time following it. I forgot what it was about after the title went away and was confused by the words and how they were used. I liked your use of transitions. I played it through a three times but still had difficulty paying attention. Emptiness can often be distracting. Nice music choice. Used well.

[LL - Xmas SadnessLock]

Use your layers.

Your trees were floating in space. Place a line or two along the horizontal in there some where to ground them. You could have better utilized your layers for the placement of trees and action. Foreground. Midground. Background. I couldn't understand what they were saying. Balance the sound out a little better.

There is a free audio editing software out there that is pretty good and has a decent set of filters. Google for Audacity. It can be found through sourceforge.net. Follow the intructions for installing the free MP3 CODEC for exporting MP3's. It is worth the effort.

[Santa's Christmas Carol]

I stayed till the end

There was something Aqua Teen Hunger Force and Family Guy about that but I can't figure out the ATHF part. I like the transition from and to the book page in the start and finish. I enjoyed it and stayed till the end. Your perspective hurt my eyes.