That was great!
That made my day! Well done. I loved all the inside Pumpkins references.
RAMONES For Christmas!!!!
I loved the placement of the Ramones.
I like green day!!
If you took those pictures, very nice!
Were you trying for shutter ghost? Or Scratched film? (along with that lense flare)
If shutter ghost, I liked the effect but the ghosting generally comes off of the brighter of the whites across the horizontal of the screen. Your's stuck around like scratches while not looking like scratches.
I like those figures.
I enjoyed this. Beautiful air plane. Imagine is by John Lennon. A 10% or 20% alpha white layer over the ground and beneath the planes would work wonders. I liked the cloud movement. Nice bomb shape.
30 % alpha white WHAT :| lol i'm new to flash XD
You seemed to have executed your idea pretty well even though I had a difficult time following it. I forgot what it was about after the title went away and was confused by the words and how they were used. I liked your use of transitions. I played it through a three times but still had difficulty paying attention. Emptiness can often be distracting. Nice music choice. Used well.
Use your layers.
Your trees were floating in space. Place a line or two along the horizontal in there some where to ground them. You could have better utilized your layers for the placement of trees and action. Foreground. Midground. Background. I couldn't understand what they were saying. Balance the sound out a little better.
There is a free audio editing software out there that is pretty good and has a decent set of filters. Google for Audacity. It can be found through sourceforge.net. Follow the intructions for installing the free MP3 CODEC for exporting MP3's. It is worth the effort.
I stayed till the end
There was something Aqua Teen Hunger Force and Family Guy about that but I can't figure out the ATHF part. I like the transition from and to the book page in the start and finish. I enjoyed it and stayed till the end. Your perspective hurt my eyes.
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